From c1e128fbcd3bb91033fe95173a419b552c0e3e44 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matthias Pfefferle <pfefferle@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 5 Dec 2022 17:45:56 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] some text improvements

props @krafit
---
 includes/functions.php | 2 +-
 templates/welcome.php  | 6 +++---
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/includes/functions.php b/includes/functions.php
index 93ec0c1..2838941 100644
--- a/includes/functions.php
+++ b/includes/functions.php
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ function get_identifier_settings( $user_id ) {
 			<td>
 				<p><code><?php echo \esc_html( \Activitypub\get_webfinger_resource( $user_id ) ); ?></code> or <code><?php echo \esc_url( \get_author_posts_url( $user_id ) ); ?></code></p>
 				<?php // translators: the webfinger resource ?>
-				<p class="description"><?php \printf( \esc_html__( 'Try to follow "@%s" in the Mastodon/Friendica search field.', 'activitypub' ), \esc_html( \Activitypub\get_webfinger_resource( $user_id ) ) ); ?></p>
+				<p class="description"><?php \printf( \esc_html__( 'Try to follow "@%s" by searching for it on Mastodon,Friendica & Co.', 'activitypub' ), \esc_html( \Activitypub\get_webfinger_resource( $user_id ) ) ); ?></p>
 			</td>
 		</tr>
 	</tbody>
diff --git a/templates/welcome.php b/templates/welcome.php
index 52aa6cf..315b8fe 100644
--- a/templates/welcome.php
+++ b/templates/welcome.php
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 <div class="privacy-settings-body hide-if-no-js">
 	<h2><?php \esc_html_e( 'Welcome', 'activitypub' ); ?></h2>
 
-	<p><?php \esc_html_e( 'ActivityPub turns your blog into a federated social network. This means you can share and talk to everyone using the ActivityPub protocol, including users of Friendica, Pleroma and Mastodon.', 'activitypub' ); ?></p>
+	<p><?php \esc_html_e( 'With ActivityPub your blog becomes part of a federated social network. This means you can share and talk to everyone using the ActivityPub protocol, including users of Friendica, Pleroma and Mastodon.', 'activitypub' ); ?></p>
 	<p>
 		<?php
 		\printf(
@@ -53,9 +53,9 @@
 
 	<hr />
 
-	<h3><?php \esc_html_e( 'Recommendet Plugins', 'activitypub' ); ?></h3>
+	<h3><?php \esc_html_e( 'Recommended Plugins', 'activitypub' ); ?></h3>
 
-	<p><?php \esc_html_e( 'ActivityPub works as is and there is no need for you to install additional plugins, nevertheless there are some that extends the functionality of ActivityPub.', 'activitypub' ); ?></p>
+	<p><?php \esc_html_e( 'ActivityPub works as is and there is no need for you to install additional plugins, nevertheless there are some plugins that extends the functionality of ActivityPub.', 'activitypub' ); ?></p>
 
 	<div class="activitypub-settings-accordion">
 		<h4 class="activitypub-settings-accordion-heading">